Poetry

Mine

by eyes + words
Comments 53

Written by Jacob Ibrag

‘Why can’t you let me into your

mind?’ Because if I did, you’ll know that

you could never be mine. I’m no more than

a cage and you were designed to fly.

Photographer Unknown

53 comments on “Mine”

  1. Ali Qureshi
    February 22, 2017

    Captivating.
    Beautiful piece, nicely written.
    Always a pleasure reading your work Jacob!

    Liked by 4 people

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  2. randyjw
    February 22, 2017

    No more, no less.

    Liked by 3 people

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  3. twenty four darker blog's
    February 22, 2017

    Jacob always best

    Liked by 2 people

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  4. Katrina
    February 22, 2017

    This is my favorite of yours so far. It’s so beautiful.

    Liked by 2 people

    Reply

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  11. emotionsoflife2016
    February 22, 2017

    Beautiful as always

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  12. TheLittleTui
    February 22, 2017

    Reblogged this on Letters to G and commented:
    ❤

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  13. Carter Ford
    February 22, 2017

    Wow. So captivating.

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  15. dandeliongirl01
    February 22, 2017

    You write with such beauty and soul.

    Liked by 1 person

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  17. savvyleigh123
    February 22, 2017

    This was a beautiful thought

    Liked by 1 person

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  18. brijkaulblog
    February 22, 2017

    VERY ILLUMINATING AND MIND CLEANING POEM

    CONGRATS.
    LEAVE SOME COMMENT ON MY WHO IS SHE EQUALLY LOVING ONE

    Liked by 1 person

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  19. taurusingemini
    February 23, 2017

    Must be heart-wrenching to realize, that NO matter how much love you feel for someone, s/he will NEVER reciprocate the same feelings back to you…

    Liked by 1 person

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  20. Debbie Gravett
    February 23, 2017

    Love this! My favourite line – “I’m no more than a cage and you were designed to fly.”

    Liked by 1 person

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  21. sppeac1987
    February 23, 2017

    So powerful, and in so few short lines! Marvellous

    Liked by 1 person

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  22. yuhublogger
    February 23, 2017

    Absolutely brilliant. I wish I could write such captivating pieces as well!

    Like

    Reply
  23. Mae's Piece of Mind
    February 23, 2017

    The words are actually poignant, portraying a feeling of inadequacy towards a love one, a fear that in letting him/her into your thoughts, they leave you.

    Liked by 1 person

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  24. Arpita Sk
    March 1, 2017

    This is so very beautiful. I’m in love with this.

    Liked by 1 person

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  25. Arpita Sk
    March 1, 2017

     I’m no more than
    a cage and you were designed to fly.

    Especially love this line

    Liked by 1 person

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  26. Malctg - The Foureyed Poet.
    March 4, 2017

    Hi eyes+words Thank you for liking “Shoreline!” Peace and Best Wishes TheFoureyedPoet.

    Liked by 1 person

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  27. Michelle Adrian
    March 7, 2017

    Beauty in a few lines.

    Liked by 1 person

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  28. tigre23
    April 12, 2017

    Great impact with a short piece!

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

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