Poetry

Mine

Written by Jacob Ibrag

‘Why can’t you let me into your

mind?’ Because if I did, you’ll know that

you could never be mine. I’m no more than

a cage and you were designed to fly.


Photographer Unknown

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53 comments on “Mine

  1. Captivating.
    Beautiful piece, nicely written.
    Always a pleasure reading your work Jacob!

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  2. No more, no less.

    Liked by 3 people

  3. This is my favorite of yours so far. It’s so beautiful.

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  5. TheLittleTui

    Reblogged this on Letters to G and commented:

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  6. Wow. So captivating.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. You write with such beauty and soul.

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  8. This was a beautiful thought

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  9. VERY ILLUMINATING AND MIND CLEANING POEM

    CONGRATS.
    LEAVE SOME COMMENT ON MY WHO IS SHE EQUALLY LOVING ONE

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Must be heart-wrenching to realize, that NO matter how much love you feel for someone, s/he will NEVER reciprocate the same feelings back to you…

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  11. Love this! My favourite line – “I’m no more than a cage and you were designed to fly.”

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  12. So powerful, and in so few short lines! Marvellous

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  13. Absolutely brilliant. I wish I could write such captivating pieces as well!

    Like

  14. The words are actually poignant, portraying a feeling of inadequacy towards a love one, a fear that in letting him/her into your thoughts, they leave you.

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  15. This is so very beautiful. I’m in love with this.

    Liked by 1 person

  16.  I’m no more than
    a cage and you were designed to fly.

    Especially love this line

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  17. Hi eyes+words Thank you for liking “Shoreline!” Peace and Best Wishes TheFoureyedPoet.

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  18. Beauty in a few lines.

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  19. Great impact with a short piece!

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