Poetry

Bliss

by eyes + words
Comments 38

Written by Jacob Ibrag

‘How’d you do it?

Two days in and all I can

think about is my next cigarette.’

Mixing a dish of raisins into the salad,

she chuckled at her question and answered,

‘it was pure bliss. Just pretend that each

smoke is a pair of your ex’s lips, and

refuse to kiss them no matter

how much they beg.’

Photographer Unknown

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38 comments on “Bliss”

  1. Ali Qureshi
    February 25, 2017

    Oh man!
    This is above anything I have read here!
    Awesome work, Jacob. 🙂

    Liked by 5 people

    Reply
  3. emotionsoflife2016
    February 25, 2017

    Nicely crafted my friend

    Liked by 3 people

    Reply
  4. chris jensen
    February 25, 2017

    Beautifully written puzzle…

    chris

    Liked by 2 people

    Reply
  8. Prajakta
    February 25, 2017

    Wow this amazing Jacob 👍👍

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  9. tamaraknowsbestblog
    February 25, 2017

    Great concept, lol well written! 😉

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  10. erbiage
    February 25, 2017

    Fantastic. So attitude, but a great take on how to get through a difficult thing.

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  11. S Francis
    February 25, 2017

    Fantastic.

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  12. sanii kyle
    February 25, 2017

    That was really good one….. Actually amazingly portrayed…… At the end it made me smile and of course it’s a better way to get through the difficulties……. Really liked reading it….. 😃😃
    Sanii✌

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  15. Zola Bee
    February 27, 2017

    Nice! This is very clever!

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  16. inncywincy13
    May 21, 2017

    This one’s seriously good.

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

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