Really nice- thanks a lot for all of your likes- means a lot! I feel like I’ve read quite a few posts on time today; I’m gonna try and write my own poem on this theme 🙂
That feeling when you’re trying to catch a moment and capture it to keep forever but within minutes you can’t even picture the face staring back at you or the sunset in the background
Eyes + Words 
As sentient beings,
we’ve been influenced within
the laws,
we’ve created for ourselves…
Ifinn i was to follow,
my new family law, society
would crucify me…
If not burn me by the stake….
chris
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Silver ship.
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we hold on and keep holding on. Til that moment as our loved ones wants us to let go with a smile, and tells us “u will be here beside me, always.”
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Really nice- thanks a lot for all of your likes- means a lot! I feel like I’ve read quite a few posts on time today; I’m gonna try and write my own poem on this theme 🙂
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That feeling when you’re trying to catch a moment and capture it to keep forever but within minutes you can’t even picture the face staring back at you or the sunset in the background
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Looking forward to your next post,
loved the image: it goes so well the context of
your piece.
Both combined gave me goosebumps! 🙂
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Thanks Ali 🙂
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I wonder what a “human second” is, as opposed to just a “second”. But it’s poetry…should I even question?
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It’s a pretty good question haha 🙂
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Excellent poem… makes me wonder about our brief lives, as I blink… 😀
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Thank you 🙂
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