Poetry

Someway

Written by Jacob Ibrag

You departed for a little over an hour. When I placed

my head on your chest, there was nothing more than a howling

silence. Arrangements were being made and I don’t know, I kept asking

everyone in the room to wait. Even when the doctor called it at one thirteen

in the morning, I kept talking to you because I knew that somehow someway

you were listening. And I was right because here you are, staring at me as if

we’ve been separated for more than a century. And I need you to tell me,

where did you go and what took you so long to come back to we?


Photographer Unknown

40 comments on “Someway

  1. snoviumeni's avatar
    snoviumeni

    This is so ME…my situation…once before but present always in my head

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  2. poemsinacoffer's avatar

    This gave me goosebumps….beautiful !

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  3. Yamini's avatar

    The picture shook me up…and the words are lovely!

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  4. Carter Ford's avatar

    This is beautiful.

    Liked by 3 people

  5. Ali Qureshi's avatar

    There’s some passion missing somehow,
    but I love the scene you have created!
    Love your work Jacob, always have and so I will.
    Keep ’em coming 🙂

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  6. Rivers Renewed's avatar

    Very beautiful indeed.

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  8. dhunterwrites's avatar
    Dainelle

    You have a unique writing style and I love it.

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  9. Cari's avatar

    Goosebumps…like a gothic poem…

    Liked by 3 people

  10. Zahrat Ash Shams's avatar

    I keep coming back for your words. they have a soul! Keep up 🙂

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  11. Extrovert Girl's life ♥️'s avatar
    karthika Padmakumar

    Woah..that was awesome 😍😍

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  12. becomingveritate's avatar

    Where did you go! and why so long to return to we!

    Very nice. I sometimes feel this way about my own self.

    Certainly gets the mind taking all kinds of twists and turns
    -IV

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  13. sanii salony's avatar

    lovely. ……really heart touching…. amazing…… 😃😃😃😃

    Liked by 3 people

  14. tamaraknowsbestblog's avatar

    So lovely and compelling!

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  15. Jay Colby's avatar

    Beautiful as always & you have a great blog!

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  16. emotionsoflife2016's avatar
    emotionsoflife2016

    Wow

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  17. missmonsoon's avatar
    missmonsoon

    Its so beautiful and sad at the same time.. 🙂

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