Poetry

Honest

Written by Jacob Ibrag

‘I haven’t been honest,’ with

you. ‘I said that everything was fine,’

and it wasn’t. ‘There are things I need to

work through,’ and I’ll convince you to let

me go. ‘There isn’t anything you can do,’

except stay when I’ll tell you not to.


Photographer Unknown

25 comments on “Honest

  1. life30's avatar

    Absolutely lovely

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  2. richcreativemuse's avatar

    I find myself struggling with letting go or not of a good friend relationship, and I think your words speak to that which we all go through whether in intimacy or long-term friendship. To be true to oneself and to be able to let go of that which no longer serves me is an axiom for good mental health and well-being. I strive to put my attention on what is life giving for me. Thank you for sharing your poetry.

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  3. Ali Qureshi's avatar

    Fine piece of work Jacob!
    I can totally relate to this.
    Looking forward to more posts
    from you as always. Cheers! 🙂

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  4. Yuhu's avatar

    This is brilliant!

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  5. beautifashionable's avatar

    Great post. Can definitely relate!

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  6. ramblingunoriginalpoetry's avatar
    ramblingunoriginalpoetry

    This sounds like me. Oh how relatable and honest you are haha! Great piece.

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  7. Smitha V's avatar

    Love the last 2 lines – ” there’s nothing you csn do, except stay when I tell you not to”👏👏

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  8. thereluctantpoet's avatar

    This is an absolutely stunning piece! I really loved it!

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  9. johnsmithiiimxiii's avatar

    I enjoy listening to you read! Thanks!

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  10. Eugi's avatar

    Beautifully written.

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  11. danroberson's avatar

    Learning to read what is said is wonderful. Learning to read what isn’t said is an art. learning to do both is a lifelong endeavor rich with treasure. Well written and very powerful.

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  12. hannahtk's avatar

    Oh the lies we tell! Beautifully written

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