Written by Jacob Ibrag
He took her right hand and continued
walking through the military base. ‘We can get
in trouble. You promised the general that we’d stay put
for further instruction, so pleading ignorance would be out of
the question,’ she whispered. You’re getting off track, he thought, ‘I
also promised I’d find us some answers or do you not care about where
we came from and why we can’t remember past sixty eight days ago? What
good is having a name if doesn’t carry any memory?’ The base was desolate and
depressed with not vessel to fill it’s emptiness. ‘Explain this,’ he continued, ‘how is
it that we know our way around this place? We just got here three days ago, that
doesn’t make any sense. I think these people are hiding something from us.’
Releasing herself from his light grasp, she took a couple of steps towards
the old white door on their left, ‘there’s something inside this room,
waiting for us.’ Looking at her, he had no idea what she was
talking about, ‘alright, I’ll put the code in.’ Breathing a
little harder, she pushed him away, ‘not right
now. We need to leave, whatever it is
behind this door just woke
up the entire base.’
This is a great piece very suspenseful
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Thank you 🙂
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Great writing. That picture really is spooky!
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Thanks Peter 🙂
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Woah, this is really good…Will there be more?
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Thanks, I’m not sure yet haha 🙂
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The fans want more 🙂
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That’s so awesome! Hope there is a second part too.
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Thank you very much 😀
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Awesome! 😊
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Thanks 🙂
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You are welcome 😊
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this is moving…really great work
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Beautifully crafted.
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Thank you 😀
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Oh my word! Intriguing ….
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Mysterious and suspenseful! Love it! Makes you yearn to know what happens
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