Written by Jacob Ibrag
Removing
the camera around her
neck, she gripped it lightly with her
right hand. This place was her inheritance
and only connection to her mother’s existence. Before
last week, she was just another product of an orphanage. She
thought about the word mother and its literal definition and why
she was gifted this place rather than her biological brother and sister.
Before indulging into anymore thought, she noticed an envelope sitting
underneath a Picasso original. Opening it, she found a large black key, a
photo of a black door and a letter with the words, ‘deliver me or leave.’
She remembered that door from when she was a kid. While all the
other children followed the art guide, she had slipped away
and walked towards the expressionism wing. Staring
at her first Jackson Pollock piece, she pretended
to live in the empty spaces between the
lines that were held together
by an ordinary
brown
frame. That’s
where the door was, next to
the piece she had almost disappeared
into. Standing in front of the black door, she
slipped in the key and turned the handle. Stepping
into the room, the lights had immediately activated
as well as a film that played on the entire wall
in front of her. It was her mother cradling
a newborn baby, ‘you’re watching
this, so I guess I must
be asleep.’
Photography by Paolo Raeli
beautiful…. we have been mutual likers for awhile… Have followed u.. hope you will do the same:)
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Hmmm…interesting
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The urge to know a home is such a strong one. This piece just makes me thankful I found mine at birth.
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Deep. This line hit home “She thought about the word mother and its literal definition and why she was gifted this place rather than her biological brother and sister.” My friend adopted one of the children she fostered for several years. She passed away when he was still very young. Yet he expressed to me recently that he knew that my friend and her husband were the best that ever happened to him. thanks for stopping by Poemattic.com.
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Thanks to you.
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Wonderful.
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Beautiful written, so dreamlike.
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Or even; beautifully written!
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You have a way, of captivating the reader’s attention span, until the last line, and the story line kept me in suspense…
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Thank you very much π
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Story telling and poetry… amazing!
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Amazing Jake, really amazing!
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Your welcome π check out some of my new poems when you get a chance
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The suspense in it……..love it
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Woah this was an emotional journey! Loved it.
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