Written by Jacob Ibrag

‘And with this ring I solemnly

swear, to stand for you in thickness of

good and times of despair.’ Noble promises

upon uncontrollable circumstance. A tomorrow

deaf from all of our voices. What we want is a

chance to deliver, a view of what could

have been lost in translation.

Photographer Unknown

15 comments on “Translation

  1. Wow, wow, wow!! Nice one Jake!

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  2. That hit me so hard. Never thought of these lines the way you have explained it here.

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  3. You’d expressed these easily broken promises so very well…

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  5. cool poetry! also, thank you for liking mine.

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