Poetry

Simplicity

by eyes + words
Comments 24

Written by Jacob Ibrag

‘Around there, did you see that?’ Silver lights

peering from a short distance. Choices. Approach the

unknown or follow the path written. ‘I’m probably just

seeing things.’ Pretending in the space of simplicity.

Photographer Unknown

24 comments on “Simplicity”

  1. cedricramey
    September 8, 2017

    Great post!

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  2. dys
    September 8, 2017

    I love your poem!

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  3. celestialk1
    September 8, 2017

    ❤ Love this so much.

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  5. dandelion
    September 8, 2017

    Nice poem. If you have time, take a look my poem and give me advise or comments. I love literary works so much.

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  7. pvcann
    September 8, 2017

    Love the words and visual

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  8. Dire_diarist
    September 9, 2017

    Aah. Intriguing. Simple yet enough. Great piece of work.

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  9. taurusingemini
    September 9, 2017

    Things that appeared to be so simple, aren’t really simple at all, and that is the oxymoron of life sometimes…

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  10. C.J. Black
    September 9, 2017

    ‘Follow the path written’ if only it were straight and narrow.

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  11. Alan J. Blaustein
    September 9, 2017

    Chance or safety? Written by whom is the deeper question, your choice or another’s for you.

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  12. Swati.
    September 10, 2017

    Wonderful lines!!

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  13. Tricia
    September 15, 2017

    Fantastic!

    Liked by 1 person

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