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History

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Written by Jacob Ibrag

And when two fell from the chairs in the sky

we put together, four more replaced them. It’s the way

it is, the way we wanted. Dark days in the past, remember?

Order; a concept to restore purpose into the arbitrary. Sign up

sheets. ‘Don’t you want to be a part of history? Fight for this,

a system that is going to change everything.’ Regret, fully.

Photography by Vinicius Amano

14 comments on “History”

  1. Carly's avatar
    Carly (message in stanza)
    September 15, 2017

    Dark and I like it. I don’t want to give it away for others but I am curious, is this about war? (Ex: Sign up sheets.)

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    • eyes + words's avatar
      eyes + words
      September 15, 2017

      Thanks Carly. It could be about that, it’s one hundred percent open to interpretation. 🙂

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        Carly (message in stanza)
        September 15, 2017

        What is your interpretation? If you don’t mind sharing. I am always curious what a writer sees when he or she writes.

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        eyes + words
        September 15, 2017

        I think I wrote this piece with the idea of constructs in mind. Hindsight usually brings past choices into the forefront and with that comes reflection, ‘did I do the right thing?’ Or ‘am I on the right side of the present?’ There are universal truths that are more or less agreed upon by humanity, agreed upon being the key. I think it’s important to understand that. We are our own architects.

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    Tricia
    September 15, 2017

    “Regret, fully”…intending responsibility

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    dtdeedge
    September 15, 2017

    Regret is life,
    The debt of breath

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  5. chris jensen's avatar
    chris jensen
    September 15, 2017

    One world government!

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    Deah Caldwell
    September 16, 2017

    I. LOVE. THIS! Gods and Government.

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    hybridageanarchist
    September 17, 2017

    ‘Don’t you want to be a part of history? Fight for this, / a system that is going to change everything.’
    Deep.

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    aristobulonietoalcaraz
    October 2, 2017

    I put on’t need to gift it away for others but I am rummy, is this about warfare? I recollect I wrote this objet d’art with the idea of constructs in intellect.

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