Poetry

Clarity

Written by Jacob Ibrag

Am I making any sense?

Are you paying enough attention?

Between. Tell me what I want, maybe it’s

that something I’ve been missing. The lines.

The rush to capture a feeling or thought. The

search for clarity and never coming close.


Photographer Unknown

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38 comments on “Clarity

  1. Life is more than words and feelings and what you see. Being doing and participating in the mysterious flow of life and love requires a precarious presence.

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  2. Oh gosh that is how I feel most of the time!

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  3. can we have clarity when nothing is ever clear?

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  4. Great post.

    We interpret what we get. Clarity is personal. We each understand in our own way.

    Have a great day! πŸ™‚

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  5. Great poem! I know how hard it is to find clarity in one’s life. I understand “the rush to capture a feeling or thought.” I sure know “brain fog” or heart fog.” Heart fog: feeling uncertain how to feel in a situation. I just coined a new phrase!

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  6. Love the Between the Lines bit. Great work

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  7. Wow. This is a lovely post πŸ‘πŸ‘

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  8. I love these questions since lately I’m so unsure of the answers. I also love the color combo in the photo; it’s my favorite this season, that much I’m sure of haha.

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  9. Great post! And thanks for the like, feel free to follow my blog for more ☺️

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  10. Love this. Very deep. I resonate with this.

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  11. Excellent poem. I really enjoyed this a lot. It made me reflect on a recently broken relationship. Crazy..

    Well, I would love to feature this poem on my Friday NIght Poetry Corner. I will reblogged his post so others can follow from my page to yours to read more of your works. Well done on such great writing..

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  12. Reblogged this on kgbethlehem and commented:
    Good evening everyone and welcome to another Friday Night Poetry Corner. This week I am featuring a piece by a gifted writer named Jacob Ibrag. The name of his poem is called “Clarity.” I promise you when you read it you will gain much more.

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  13. Thank you, powerful, intense. πŸ™‚

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  14. By the way, having trouble subscribing. When I enter my surname it tells me to enter a correct number?? I’m txs

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  15. Oh Jacob. come now. thanks for dropping in. yr name does come up a lot though, doesnt it. pretty neat pattern with that last post, man

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  16. Great stuff! I like the atypical line breaks. I really enjoy your works.
    Bravo mate!

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