Written by Jacob Ibrag
Black marble rolling on uneven
pavement. She follows as it gains speed, rolling
over gum indentations and aged concrete. Nowhere
else she’d rather exist, focusing on distraction rather
than the people she promised to forget. Black marble
rolling past the empty houses, past the empty cars.
She follows as it gains speed, rolling over the
hidden scars of a quiet community.
Photography by Thomas Ramirez
this was great.
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Thank you π
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I like the way you use the image of the rolling marble to stand in for the girl’s tortured life. It is a strong visual image as well as a powerful metaphor. Good job. I like this poem a lot.
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Thank you very much Richard π
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Oh my goodness. This is haunting yet absolutely mesmerizing. Great work.
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Thank you π
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“hidden scars of a quiet community.” Man, those lines
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