Written by Jacob Ibrag
Revelations. Assumptions
stumped accordingly. What was
once a thought, crushed. Allegations
and rumor. ‘I’m pretty sure that’s what
happened.’ Upside down. It starts with
a whisper and ends with a storm.
Photo by Tanja Heffner
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Onnce more..killed it!!!!
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Thank you 🙂
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Interesting. It’s very concrete. Especially for today’s age. Rumors ought to be kept in the mill; though there is no moral weight in your poem’s tone. The poem is very matter of fact. It captures an “Essence” very well; the meaning isn’t hidden, but it doesn’t need to be hidden.
It hits my conscience, particularly. It’s blowing up random access memories, fears, doubts, which is what good poetry should do. It’s accessed something, particularly that hidden secret we all have, the fear of being found out, or the fear of being not accepted. The poem reaches into a subconscious measure, almost dreamlike.
I like this poem a lot.
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Thank you very much Brandon 😀
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You’re welcome.
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starts with a whisper! Nice! 🙂
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Thank you 😀
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No. Thank you! 🙂
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Awesome
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Thanks 😀
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AMAZING! 💙
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Thank you 🙂
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Yup, that described the SHOCKS of whatever’s revealed to you so unexpected all right!!!
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Amazing !
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Thanks 🙂
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That line, though: “It starts with a whisper and ends with a storm.” Powerful!
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Thank you very much Deah 😀
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You are very welcome, Jacob. 🙂
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