Written by Jacob Ibrag
Key around her neck. He wonders where
it connects. Heart in hand, she let him have it when
they first met. Mind in his chest, he always knows what
she’s thinking. He always knows. It’s from the other, the
soul from her last relationship. A reminder of what of
she’s left. A key to a home that’ll always be there.
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This piece, very touching..
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Thanks Chris π
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Awesome piece π₯
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Thank you π
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The poem is so interesting and intriguing, had to read it 3 times. The key could be interpreted in different ways, but I’d like to believe the ‘reminder’ is useful, in that she is making a choice to have that available home but yet never return.
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Thank you very much Jeremy π
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I really love this. It holds a lot of depth, for sure!
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You are so welcome π
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I so agree. It’s wonderful to see and enjoy.
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last relationship meaning her ex is still in her heart somewhere
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Very touched! Thank you.
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Thank you π
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how beautifully you have captured the way people think/feel in a relationship!
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Thanks Sahar π
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You are welcome
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So beautifully done!!
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Thank you π
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Lovely!
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It’s my pleasure! π
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Amazing poem. Just loved it.
I have also written a poem on eyes. Please do have a read. I hope you will enjoy it and help me with your valued feedback π
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Your welcome π
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Great poem! It’s so hard to let go of the past sometimes.
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Reblogged this on Women Who Think Too Much by Jeanne Marie.
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