Written by Jacob Ibrag
I read you like a book. Text etched into
stone. Word after every word, unoriginal. Thoughts
I knew you’ve harbored before speaking them. A program,
nothing more than a design in the system. Unable to stretch
the limbs you’ve been given. ‘My eyes are opened,’ I beg to
differ. You’ve been coded, weighed and delivered. My
blind friend, soon you’ll have to wake up. And
if you can’t, I wish you the best of luck.
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Over the years Eyes + Words has turned into a wonderful budding family of over fifteen thousand people across all platforms. It’s surreal and humbling to know that the art of poetry and story is alive and thriving. That being said, I hope that the creation of the Eyes + Words Writers Group serves as a vehicle and launch pad to help and support writers and the aspiring ones to keep manifesting words that many out there are searching for everyday. So go on and contribute, lets elevate together. Everyone is encouraged to share their experiences with anything involving writing.
Many of us are currently walking through life blind, and we’re not even aware of it…
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Ouch!
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Maybe she’s the one who is awake and all these words are the lyrics to the dream that you refuse to wake up from
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Maybe
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I enjoy the way you formatted this piece. The last word/words before each break resonate as thet lead to the next.
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Thank you ๐
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Smell the roses
my fine
written friend,
your words are elegant
an imaginative style..
But your eyes are closed,
you wouldnโt see
the truth….
You would believe weโre
the only sentient creature
look at the stars,
just like the one
buried under a hotel…
chris
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So nice! ๐
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Thanks ๐
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This poem is brilliant! Thanks for sharing. Waking up is challenging with so many layers.
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Thank you very much ๐
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the structure is poetic, so are the words ! good work… very well composed…
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Thank you very much ๐
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Oh man I Missed u a lot
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Hope I didn’t disappoint ๐
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No I just missed ur words and all
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