Poetry

Lovers on a Train

Written by Jacob Ibrag

Two lovers on a train holding hands at

night. Married to the present and providing each

others light. We don’t understand it and how could we?

Jaded observers far removed from what used to be.

And when they go, the light will travel. Two

lovers on a train and everyone else.


Photo by Corey Agopian

9 comments on “Lovers on a Train

  1. taurusingemini's avatar

    When we’re in love , it seemed, that nobody else matters, or exists in this world, besides the two of us…

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  2. Jackie Lowe's avatar

    Do you know what your words made me picture.. a rush, a million people walking fast in all directions. And in the middle of it all, a light; a blinding glow of two people holing hands, like the peaceful center of a tornado. You express quite a lot with your poetry, quite a lot…

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  3. randyjw's avatar

    That is a really nice sentiment. And nice to see you posting more often again. CSS to you!

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  4. randyjw's avatar

    You’re welcome, Jacob 😊

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  5. millyannscorner's avatar
    She_Writes

    This is excellent 🌻

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  6. Bhagyashree's avatar

    Great poetry! You seem to have a great grasp on descriptive poetry!

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