Written by Jacob Ibrag
‘And with this ring I solemnly
swear, to stand for you in thickness of
good and times of despair.’ Noble promises
upon uncontrollable circumstance. A tomorrow
deaf from all of our voices. What we want is a
chance to deliver, a view of what could
have been lost in translation.
Wow, wow, wow!! Nice one Jake!
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That hit me so hard. Never thought of these lines the way you have explained it here.
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Reblogged this on crjen1958.
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Cool!
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You’d expressed these easily broken promises so very well…
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cool poetry! also, thank you for liking mine.
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^_^ subscribed and hope to see more of your works as well.
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