Written by Jacob Ibrag
You expect me to fill the gaps within
your heart, to disregard all the hate you
have for yourself. Somewhere along the lines
of us, you became a carbon copy of our blank
walls, draped with potential yet lack of color.
There are times when glimpses of you would
seep through those still eyes and I’d cry because
it would never last longer than a few seconds.
Part of me wonders if I should just leave in
hopes that you rediscover your missing
piece, the piece that used to fill me.


Deep
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Wonderful poetry!
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I love that there is no more writing on the walls.. Great poem Jacob!
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Thank you 🙂
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Welcome!
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Missing piece: Whose? Subject or Object, the narrator’s or the addressee?
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Both are missing pieces, and a reason could be the dependence that they’ve built after a certain time together. He’s forgotten who he used to be before the relationship had started. She believes that the person she fell in love with made the universe make sense and as he started to fade, so did her confidence.
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I love the imagery in this poem – “a carbon copy of our blank walls, draped with potential yet lack of color” – what a great visual image this gave me – thanks!
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Thanks Wendy 🙂
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You have captured a moment so well that many can relate to.
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Life’s too short to wallow in the mire. Take my advice, been there done that, and I aged a decade in three years. Write On!
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