Written by Jacob Ibrag
Wrapped in confusion, or am I married to
delusion that everything will gravitate towards its
right place. Refraining from movement, it’s this belief
that has me stagnant. Self paralysis. It’ll get better, no point
of lifting a finger. After a while, the water starts coming in
faster, reaching my neck. Yet I’m not in a panic, this was all
meant to happen. Motionless, steady as an old man at an
elderly home. Then it starts creeping into my mouth,
and then my ears. I can’t breathe, I begin to fade.
By the time I realize my mistake, it’s too late.
Forged my own destiny and fate.


Nice poem
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Thank Sam 🙂
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So deeply poem
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Thank you 🙂
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Can u teach me to be a good author?
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I’m still learning myself haha. I think it’s all about being consistent and allowing yourself to mature as a writer.
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So? How we can have many friends in WordPress? Are u following me?
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I don’t really pay attention to that, it’s all about writing.
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Oh I see. Where are u from? What’s your name? Nice to meet you on this application.
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I’m a New Yorker who goes by the name of Jacob.
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I’m Indonesian, SURABAYA city you can call me djoe. Nice to meet u. I hope I can to be a professional writer.
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Nice to meet you Djoe, hopefully we both can someday 🙂
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Have a Facebook?
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https://www.facebook.com/eyespluswords/
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Because I am noob about blog haha
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You’ll get the hang of it 🙂
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Suicide ?
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feeling this one 🙂
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Wow very well written 🙂
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Thanks Shri 🙂
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wow. speechless.
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😀
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Good one!
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Thanks 🙂
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Welcome.:)
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