Poetry

Lies

Written by Jacob Ibrag

‘Tell me something though,

how did you find out?’

Walking towards the door,

 she stops and turns around,

‘your heart whispered it to

me last night, just couldn’t

hold on to all of your lies.’


Photographer Unknown

20 comments on “Lies

  1. bluebutterflyeffect's avatar
    Butterfly Effect

    Hmm..

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  2. Leroy Wilson's avatar

    so delicately written. beautiful

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  3. Parrhesiastic's avatar

    Just saw your blog, it’s amazing. Check my poems, need reviews from experts like you. http://wp.me/p7CRLB-17

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  4. 1kayaker's avatar

    Wonderful choice of words

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  5. bviragh86's avatar
    Brea Viragh

    Wish I had thought to say this to someone in the right moment

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  6. Rancho do Peregrino's avatar

    It’s very nice and beautiful

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  7. Yomna's avatar

    so simple yet so moving. nice work

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  8. Tanya Cliff's avatar

    Jacob, I am as moved by your choice of words as by the pictures you use to highlight them…Amazing work!

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  9. Bruce Sims's avatar
    brujsims

    Lies have a stench that can be easily recognized if you truly pay attention to it.

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  10. The Smiling Pilgrim's avatar
    The Smiling Pilgrim

    That picture really draws you in and the writing is really good I like how you worded that last bit :)!

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Abirami's avatar

    Reblogged this on The Obsessive Writer.

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  12. XsZ Studioz's avatar

    but the lies wasnt mine, my heart was tired so it spoke to you as it were needing air to breathe.

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