Written by Jacob Ibrag
Time dripped through the IV bag and into his
veins. Prescribed by a voice in the sky, he wondered
if he was losing his mind. During the final minutes of his
life, the voice crept into his right ear and asked him if he had
any last requests. ‘I’ve never wanted much of anything. Please,
let me see her face. Allow me to lock stares with her as I wither
away from this place. I don’t care if I’m hallucinating, just do
this for me.’ As the last drop of time parted from the bag,
the world slowed down for just a minute. She looked
at him and held his hand, ‘I’ll see you soon again.’


So sad and beautiful 😦 – Michelle
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Thank you 🙂
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Time dripped through the IV bag, what imagery. So sad, but so lovely. 🙂
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Thanks Carissa 🙂
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You’re welcome, friend!
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Amazing!
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Thanks 🙂
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This deserves the F word!!!
Stunning! Breathtaking!!!
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Thank you very much 🙂
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My pleasure Truly…bravo! fantastically and beautifully written.
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Very creative and I could actually feel the intensity of his feelings. Nice one.
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Thank you 🙂
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You are welcome
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Sooo romantic yet sad
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My pleasure
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Beautiful write! Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for reading 🙂
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This is so beautiful. It has a lot of pain hidden inside.
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Thank you 🙂
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Pleasure my dear!
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Such a wonderful sentiment of how someone can meet up with someone s/he loves after death…
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You’re welcome.
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I love this piece…such a small thing to ask when offered the world.
Thank you for liking my poems…:)
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Thanks Judi 🙂
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Oh my! This brings a tear to my eye. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks for reading 😀
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my pleasure
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I am sorry, I have been feasting on your blog for how long alone today now? That is the repercussions of having a beautiful collection of words. Yours is my library henceforth. I think I have enough materials for a life time here.
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Thanks haha 🙂
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Beautifully written.
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Thank you 😀
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