Poetry

Scars

Written by Jacob Ibrag

She wakes up to find him still in her bed.

‘Not gonna lie, figured you’d be gone by now,’

she whispers. ‘This early? Besides, it’s the weekend

and I’d rather keep staring at you,’ he says. Smiling, she

gestures at her back as to remind him of something. ‘So

you used to have wings, my hair started to gray when I

was in the second grade,’ he tells her. ‘Doesn’t bother

you that-‘ ‘No, the fact that you shared that side of

yourself makes me love you even more,’ he says

as he grazes his fingers across the parallel

scars on her back. ‘You are beautiful.’


Photographer Unknown

27 comments on “Scars

  1. Seekingjoy's avatar

    Nice post

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  2. CarissaMarie's avatar

    Beautiful 🙂 We should be able to share all of us with the one we love, especially the not so pretty parts. ♡

    Liked by 3 people

  3. hjos009's avatar

    If only people could be that open to one another.

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  4. chris jensen's avatar

    i feel the same every girl that passes..

    chris

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  5. XsZ Studioz's avatar
    Oliver A. Melendez

    Love grows when you are always in love and give love.

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  6. Timeandreflections's avatar

    Wow. A powerful love.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Rachel McKee's avatar

    I like how conversational this piece is, it makes it easy to relate.

    Liked by 2 people

  8. The Authoress's avatar

    This is so sweet!

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  9. diaryofasoulwriter's avatar

    This is lovely ❤ I love how you discreetly slip in a supernatural detail in your poetry. It brings a whole other dimension to your lines. Once again. I love it!

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  10. taurusingemini's avatar

    Love is, accepting each other for all of one’s flaws…

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  11. Missus A's avatar
    mimispassion

    Nice and short. I love the outlook

    Liked by 2 people

  12. lionofjudahtv's avatar

    Very spot on, beauty should be organic have a poem has some contrast. 💣💥🌲

    Liked by 1 person

  13. photoscientist's avatar
    photoscientist

    This thing called love is interesting. I have yet to feel or grasp its true meaning.

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