Poetry

No

Written by Jacob Ibrag

You count down from ten while holding

onto your breath. Careful. Don’t make a sound, he

might hear you inhale. He holds you close, clenching his

fists. Four in the morning, you look towards the exit. Grab

his hand away from your heart and transplant it onto the bed.

This was all a mistake,  a choice that you were never supposed

to make. He promised you the moon, the stars and everything

in between.You waited half of your life, force feeding on

his dreams. And somewhere down the lie, something

in you awoke. It was an image of his hand covering

your mouth as you tried to scream no.


Photographer Unknown

34 comments on “No

  1. fetinatwinkle's avatar

    good one πŸ™‚

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  2. nombre de la pluma's avatar

    very creepy, but well written. If it’s only an image, RUN.

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  3. sinisterdarksoul's avatar

    Wow! This elicits fear on a primal level. Well written, and interesting commentary.

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  4. misstalkaholic's avatar

    Aw… it’s very heart wrenching

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  5. Beauty From Ashes's avatar

    Ahhhh! This is potent!

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  6. wanderlustandcoffeelover's avatar
    wanderlustandcoffeelover

    wow that last line scared me

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  7. Sanya Monga's avatar
    Sanya Monga

    This-was-amazingggg…
    Nice one !

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  8. Mackenzie's avatar

    This is a nightmare come to life. It is so raw, real, and necessary to be heard

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  9. ImaginingsOfRima's avatar

    This has very powerful imagery. A great read. πŸ™‚

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  10. BoySlut Magazine's avatar

    This can easily be interpreted into a very common scenario but it’s that one word that tends to give new meaning to it. Brilliantly penned, Jacob; well thought out and played.

    ~Devlin

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  11. theintrospectivepoet's avatar

    A chill-inducing and powerful piece; I love coming across poems like this. Very well done πŸ™‚

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  12. Freedom2Survive's avatar
    rbaldwin0204

    This stops you in your tracks. Well done!

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  13. cestlavieladypatience's avatar

    My goodness. Creepy and scary.

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  14. taurusingemini's avatar

    and, with that realization, hopefully, the narrator will finally, make her getaway from this guy who doesn’t really love her, but is controlling her instead…

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  16. ladyphoenix2016's avatar

    Very powerful! You tapped into the dark side of this type of abuse. I pray that our words would move people to realize this is a real epidemic, not a hollywood movie. The fear is real, as is the threat.

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  17. timelesswheel's avatar
    timelesswheel

    Very well written and portrayed

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  18. Srivi's avatar
    Aroma Blogger

    Amazing !!! really really amazing write !!!

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  19. Malctg - #TheFoureyedPoet.'s avatar

    Hi Eyes + Words Powerful! Thank you for liking my poem “The Ships!” Peace and Best Wishes. The Foureyed Poet.

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