Written by Jacob Ibrag

He traced her shadow as she turned her eyes

towards the rising sun. Hearing the scratches of the

pencil upon his notebook, she turns back and smiles. ‘What

are you sketching?’ Hiding his work from her inquiring attention,

he asks her to hold still for a few more seconds, ‘I swear I’m almost

finished.’ Unable to deliver her patience, she peaks over his shoulder

and stares at his pending creation, ‘she’s perfect.’ Shifting away from

his picture, he looks back at her and whispers, ‘if I had to try to

draw the perfect girl, she wouldn’t even come close to you.

I wouldn’t know where I’d begin or how to capture

the soul married underneath your skin.’

Photographer Unknown


26 comments on “Creation

  1. This is amazing… 🙂

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  2. Just so gorgeous… Amazing penning

    Ahhhh! That last line… Stunning killer

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  3. whythemonnot


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  4. the last line, the last line is everything!!! wonderful

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  6. Completely wonderful!

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  7. Smooth…real smooth. 😉

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  8. Apart from the scratchy pencil, I buy it 🙂

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  9. I absolutely loved this! ❤️
    Feel free to check out some of my poems on my page or my quotes and let me know what you think in the comments 🙂

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  10. Very nice. Well done!

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  11. caroltiyelesa

    The ending took me off guard but I loved reading it nonetheless

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  12. Beautiful work!! Great job! ♥☻

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Its so sappy! But so sweet! Its amazing.

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