Poetry

Creation

Written by Jacob Ibrag

He traced her shadow as she turned her eyes

towards the rising sun. Hearing the scratches of the

pencil upon his notebook, she turns back and smiles. ‘What

are you sketching?’ Hiding his work from her inquiring attention,

he asks her to hold still for a few more seconds, ‘I swear I’m almost

finished.’ Unable to deliver her patience, she peaks over his shoulder

and stares at his pending creation, ‘she’s perfect.’ Shifting away from

his picture, he looks back at her and whispers, ‘if I had to try to

draw the perfect girl, she wouldn’t even come close to you.

I wouldn’t know where I’d begin or how to capture

the soul married underneath your skin.’


Photographer Unknown

26 comments on “Creation

  1. ignist's avatar
    tamarastamenkovic

    This is amazing… 🙂

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  2. Beauty From Ashes's avatar

    Just so gorgeous… Amazing penning

    Ahhhh! That last line… Stunning killer

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  3. inspirememonica's avatar
    whythemonnot

    brilliant

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  4. OlakunleSaid's avatar

    the last line, the last line is everything!!! wonderful

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  6. Rivers Renewed's avatar

    Completely wonderful!

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  7. sinisterdarksoul's avatar

    Smooth…real smooth. 😉

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  8. Lise Colas's avatar

    Apart from the scratchy pencil, I buy it 🙂

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  9. K. Edmunds's avatar

    I absolutely loved this! ❤️
    Feel free to check out some of my poems on my page or my quotes and let me know what you think in the comments 🙂

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  10. Success Inspirers' World's avatar

    Very nice. Well done!

    Liked by 1 person

  11. caroltiyelesa's avatar
    caroltiyelesa

    The ending took me off guard but I loved reading it nonetheless

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  12. Beauty Between's avatar

    Beautiful work!! Great job! ♥☻

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  13. Sal Dias's avatar
    Mentalruse

    Its so sappy! But so sweet! Its amazing.

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