Written by Jacob Ibrag
I was seconds away from meeting my maker. The man in the
pink mask didn’t say a word, he didn’t need to. I didn’t want to hear
the voice of my deliverer. Bullets are meant to exit their chamber, and
his purpose was to lift my soul to the heavens. Spreading my arms open,
I let out a laugh. This vessel carried me through thick and thin, it’s job was
nearly finished. As I prepared for the blow, the ice cold muzzle slipped away
from my skull. He dropped the gun and took off the mask. He was a she, and
she was my love. Grabbing the gun off the floor, I gave it back to her and
guided her hands towards my heart. Adrenaline reunited us. We kissed
as I helped her pull the trigger. The bullet left its home and found a
new one. Gone. As my eyes closed, they reopened once more.
This time I wasn’t dreaming. Turning to my left, there she
was sleeping. ‘Last night I caught you, cheating.’


Good one👍
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Thanks Vivek.:)
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Wooooah! You’re a great writer
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Thank you 🙂
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Reblogged this on Addy through the looking glass 👀.
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Omggggg wow
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Jaw dropping * brilliantly written! gorgeous devastation!
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Thank you very much 😀
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Absolutely. Lovely to read!
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This was powerful. Great write and great read!
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Thank you very much 🙂
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You’re very welcome! You’re a great writer. Do you just write out thoughts? Or do you plan out before you write? Just curious
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There’s actually no planning, it’s all kinda spur of the moment.
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Very cool! Keep writing!
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Such powerful expressions!! Great!! 👍
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Thanks Meenakshi 🙂
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WOW. I just read this one and loved it. Looking forward to more from you. Thank you for sharing.
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I like the twist!
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Beautifully illustrated within a mysterious ending..
cheers chris
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Thanks Chris 🙂
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Nice poem! The rhyme at the end ties in the whole ending.
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Thank you 🙂
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Being cheated on surely DOES feel like getting SHOT, doesn’t it? You’d created this lively imagery for me…
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Beautifully written!
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Thanks Shrey 🙂
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Wow. You are blessed with words.
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Thanks 🙂
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That was a roller coaster ride. Very good!
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Thank you 😀
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Very powerful!
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Thank you 🙂
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This poem is fascinating. The story could be about him cheating or about her cheating; both scenarios equal his demise.
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Thank you 😀
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