Written by Jacob Ibrag
Faces in the void seek answers to unknown
questions. Souls married to vessels plagued with
existential crises. Dry mouths, bloodshot eyes. Waiting
for something, anything to happen. Lost in the need to be
different. Told from an early age that they were special, that
they had potential. Ran away when they heard words like hard
work and determination. Commence mental deterioration, add a
pinch of increasing expectations as days progress into the decades.
Progressively pacing towards a dead end. Aggressively frustrated
at others success, they want a piece of it. No, they want the entire
thing. Delusional, by now it’s fused within their intellect. By now
they’ve lost the will to begin again. It’s too late for them. Blinded.
They think they want what everybody else has. They lost sight of
the only passenger that mattered more than anything. They
forgot about the soul inside, whispering answers to
the questions they have yet to think of.
I am struggling to even find the words to describe what I think about this writing. It is raw, and true to each word. I found myself rereading lines over and over simply because they spoke to me so. I need more of his work in my life. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you very much π
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These lines very well depict the dilemma of youngsters. I moved by your thoughtfulness. Wonderfully written!
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Thanks Ammy π
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Wonderful
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Thank you π
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Wow! I love this and all your work. This really captures those who have yet to grow up. I think in all of us however, feel this way at least once in a year. There are always more questions.
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Thanks Jared π
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This is fantastic, Jacob! I really lije this piece, and I especially like the physical shape of it: unique, like a fingerprint.
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Thank you Randy π
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Aww π
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I enjoyed reading your insightful poem about paradox of the underachieving gifted person. I taught gifted ed for a couple of years for middle school students. I saw this challenge often. You gave it form with this poem.
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Thanks LuAnne π
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Wow just wow! You are gifted at words.
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Thank you π
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Wonderful and true.
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Thanks π
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Love the insight inside this one~
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Thank you very much π
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It’s powerful ! I loved it ..
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Thank you π
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You’re amazing!
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Thank you very much Laura π
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Nice work!
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Thank you π
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Oh gosh! So beautiful and very true of this younger generation, I think
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Near perfect summarisation of the impossible.
Markedly human in its imperfection.
Thanks for sharing.
Eli
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Thanks π
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My absolute pleasure.
Do stay in touch π
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