Poetry

Presence

by eyes + words
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Written by Jacob Ibrag

I want to hold her tight, yet

her eyes question my intentions.

Body language painted with blue

indiscretion. If only she understood

what her presence has planted in me.

I’ll never leave. Swear on this and

every possible eternity.

Photographer Unknown

17 comments on “Presence”

  1. rothpoetry
    August 25, 2016

    You are hooked! Love the faces on your poems.

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  2. Casual Procrastinator
    August 25, 2016

    I love how the language of the poem sweeps upwards from a personal interaction to something very large in scale. It gives a real feeling of the importance of the words at the end.

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  3. Vivek Vatsal1
    August 25, 2016

    Its deep, very deep in her eyes!! Words are apt☺👍

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  4. Frank Anthony
    August 25, 2016

    love this great job.
    -FA

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  5. V.J.
    August 25, 2016

    Always love your posts – your use of the English language is exquisite!

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  6. restless artist
    August 26, 2016

    I love this.

    —maybe she looks at you like that for a reason…

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  7. emotionsoflife2016
    August 26, 2016

    Beautiful

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  8. flyingcolours603
    August 26, 2016

    He poetry is so true there are trust issues especially in women it’s hard to believe that he will not leave

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  9. Rob
    November 18, 2016

    I can relate

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