Poetry

Presence

Written by Jacob Ibrag

I want to hold her tight, yet

her eyes question my intentions.

Body language painted with blue

indiscretion. If only she understood

what her presence has planted in me.

I’ll never leave. Swear on this and

every possible eternity.


Photographer Unknown

17 comments on “Presence

  1. rothpoetry's avatar

    You are hooked! Love the faces on your poems.

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  2. Casual Procrastinator's avatar
    Casual Procrastinator

    I love how the language of the poem sweeps upwards from a personal interaction to something very large in scale. It gives a real feeling of the importance of the words at the end.

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  3. Vivek Vatsal1's avatar

    Its deep, very deep in her eyes!! Words are apt☺👍

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  4. Frank Anthony's avatar

    love this great job.
    -FA

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  5. VJ's avatar

    Always love your posts – your use of the English language is exquisite!

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  6. April's avatar
    restless artist

    I love this.

    —maybe she looks at you like that for a reason…

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  7. emotionsoflife2016's avatar
    emotionsoflife2016

    Beautiful

    Liked by 1 person

  8. The writer's avatar
    flyingcolours603

    He poetry is so true there are trust issues especially in women it’s hard to believe that he will not leave

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  9. RecoveryWise's avatar

    I can relate

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