Written by Jacob Ibrag
Stories so flawless or so she
preaches. She blows smoke and
we inhale it. It’s her world and we’re
the static characters. Never changing,
mostly irrelevant. Fixed minds. Black and
white imaginations. She’s the architect,
we’re the hallucinations. A collective
of blank pages that remain honest
till she presses her ink on us.


This is great!! Love it! š
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Very well written it is awesome. I like it a lot. You’re very good with words and poetry. I enjoy your work
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Love this–we all know people like this. Yes?
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This is really amazing! š
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This poem is quite enjoyable. I am entertained by characters who have a life of their own. I am currently re-reading (for at least the third time!) a book about an author and his muse/character called Mantissa by John Fowles. Obviously I love the book but I think you would, too, Jacob. Love this playful poem.
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I’ll check it out, thanks LuAnne š
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Beautiful!
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Reminds me of the song lyrics that say, “She’s a man eater!”
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It speaks. Great work again.
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This is so beautiful. I read it thrice. You have given perfect curves to this poem. Loved it. ššš
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Thank you very much š
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i enjoyed this one, especially the title, cheers
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The reasons why the characters come to life is because the writers made them come alive…
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Beautifully written
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Amazing, please check mine https://lmvaldezsite.wordpress.com/2017/02/25/second-project/, because I want it to be as perfect as yours
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