Poetry

Keep

Written by Jacob Ibrag

She whispered, he listened. She cried, he

 comforted. She laughed, he made faces. She sang

in the night sky, he sang chorus. She wanted more,

he walked away. She called out his name, his tears asked

 her to refrain. She asked why, he had nothing to say. She

swore to never forgive him, he swore to never love again.

He got sick, she got worried. He made hospital visits, she

ran to his side. He made her promise to go on without

him, she vowed to never give up. His soul found a new

home, her heart broke into a million parts. She had

a promise  to keep, ‘I’ll forever be yours.’


Photographer Unknown

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41 comments on “Keep

  1. Very nicely done!

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  2. That is very beautiful, but also heartbreaking.

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  3. A story heard before but nrver so bea

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  4. A story heard before but never so beautifully presented…..sorry for the earlier half reply that was sent in the middle of it by mistake

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  5. Beautifully written ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘โคโคโค

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  6. I loved this ! Simple yet stunning. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  7. Tamara Yancosky Moore

    This brings tears to my eyes, but it’s very beautiful โค

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  8. Amazingly beautiful. Please check my blog at https://highinloveblog.wordpress.com/

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  9. A heartbreakingly beautiful story told! Pain is so close to pleasure.
    Another marvellous write.

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  10. Wow, another truly wonderful piece…

    chris

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  11. Amazing how two.people can be on the verge of breaking, and how due to some unforeseen twists of life can keep two people on the verge of breaking together…

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  12. So beautiful. Reminded me of my story. So simply yet elegantly written

    Liked by 1 person

  13. See. This is why you don’t want to fall in love.

    Liked by 1 person

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