Written by Jacob Ibrag
Had a dream last night. Still haven’t decided
whether I liked it or not because you were there.
Painted with an affectionate grin, I was reminded
of all the good we used to share. There I was, in this
dreamland holding this familiar yet foreign hand. The
stubborn rain went on, magnifying your sweet scent.
And so I pushed away, knowing it was more than I
could handle. I was an addict again, thirsty for your
fading attention. Restraining my desire, I readjusted
my eyes to the dark skies. Yet my heart kept staring
narrowly into your soul. And there you were, in a
wedding dress holding a baby. She had your
pure blonde hair, and his sly smile.


Amazingly written. Loved the way you’ve explained the soul still staring narrowly. Beautiful!
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Another beautiful write
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You are welcome!
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Phenomenal
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My pleasure
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Great poem – interesting juxtaposing of images and emotions from the dream.
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so beautiful !
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Imagery on point sir!
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Aww…I love the way you write! ^_^
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This is amazing ! Beautiful piece, full of emotions. You sure know how to use words 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Breathtaking!
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