Written by Jacob Ibrag
Don’t pull on the loose thread, you aren’t
ready to bear beyond the surface. I share with
you what your mind can digest. Bit by bit, you
drink on the truths I spill. Your thirst increases
by the day, begging for my hand to double your
intake. Careful child, you’re pulling again. The
world you seek may unravel you from within.
Photography by David Uzochukwu
your poems are amazing
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Thank you π
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This is so beautiful..
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I want to read this over & over to digest it fully. So much truth contained in one short poem! Life can only be lived one day, one minute, one moment at a time. Beautifully expressed.
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Haha thank you very much π
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Loved this. Thank you
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Marvelous
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My pleasure
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Awesome Jacob. I love this poem, and the image is just perfect
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Thank you very much π
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Loving your page! Great content!
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World needs truth!
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The mystery of the world within?
cheers chris
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That could be it. π
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OMG. This is too heavy. The reality that you have captured through this short poem is an amazing work of yours. I read it thrice to understand it completely. Beautiful work there. ππ
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I’m glad you enjoyed it, thank you π
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I keep reading this, falling more and more in love with the words. xx
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Thank you very much Aimen π
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Beautiful work…truly beautiful.
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A beautiful description of what can occur with intimacy.
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A very finely crafted and well thought out piece. I congratulate you on this special collection of words.
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Love it.
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That desire to know has ruined many. Very deep piece.
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Thanks Marie π
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Fantastic poem. Embrace this moment, it is the only time we have.
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I’ve been following your blog since you followed or liked one of my posts (I forget which, but that is neither here nor there), and have never regretted it since. Your poems often captivate my attention, and this one did so especially.
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That means a lot, thank you very much π
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Beautiful
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Very true…..beautifully written !
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