Written by Jacob Ibrag
There’s a difference between you and I.
For example, I won’t look back to reminisce after
we’re finished. You will not occupy space in my mind
making me grow weak as your memory spreads like an
infection. I won’t care about your well being or your state
of anything. And why would I care or give you an inkling
of attention, after all it was you that ceased to exist from we.
You who moved forward only to walk back to what this use
to be. Nothing else made sense for you because why would it?
Bliss was personified through the love we made underneath
natures sheets as the stars catered to our visual needs. I gave
you the purest parts of my being, and made you my reason
for breathing. After departing, all that was left was a shell of
my former personality. I didn’t know who I was, you took
that away from me. And yet here I stand years removed
from what had happened. Your voice a little older now,
pleading relationship resurrection. I tell you that I’m
spoken for, married to someone that fell in love
with my flaws. I thank you for leaving, for
letting me discover who I was.


Perfect 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Lovely piece of writing.
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Welcome 🙂
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Oh wow. ❤
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This was dope. I imagine this is how my ex girlfriend felt towards me. lol…
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Thanks Vinny 🙂
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Thanks for the poetry.. Im learning how to not suck at it..lol
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It’s all about consistency haha, you’ll get there 🙂
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Before this blog, id call bs on that advice.. But youre right.. Im improving slightly.lol
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Really love and needed to read this today, thank you ❤
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Glad you liked it Azaria 🙂
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Great piece, I really enjoyed reading it! 😊
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Thanks 😀
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You’re welcome!
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This post is pretty deep and I related to it in more ways than one. Captivating and interesting… 😉
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Thanks Charis 😀
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loved it!
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I like this. Moving,and so well expressed.
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Thanks Roland 🙂
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Wow, emotions personified!
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So powerful.
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Ouch! I hope that’s not how my exes (whom I left) feel.. Although, I can work with that. 🙂 Expressive.. wonderful! Thank you.
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Thanks Anne 🙂
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I particularly like the last line.
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Beautifully written!
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All awhile reciting, “When I grow up, I want to write like you.” 😉
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Amazing last lines 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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E+w this is lovely. I will like to remake this, into my words, with same title, and a link back to you as acknowledgement of source. Deal? I just can’t let this go.
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Sure, thanks for asking 🙂
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Wow, that’s really deep. It says it all. Marvelous work.
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Thank you 🙂
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Oh, yes. Being able to thank the hurt for the bliss thereafter takes great patience and forgiveness of self.
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This poem holds all of my current emotions and candidness.
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wow, I miss him so……
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And I’m sure that he misses you too.
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……i wish it were true. He’ll never leave my mind….hidden away, i keep him to myself.
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Until this write, I didn’t realize I had stopped missing him and started living again. He will always be a sparkle in my eye as he raises his kids w/his wife @ his side. He breathed life into me, woke a part of me that has yet to be tamed; only by his voice alone……does he remain. I’ve been me down a long lonely path, to discover who I am, so i can offer my genuine self in totality. I wasn’t ready when he was. He’ll always be a soft spot in my heart for sure. A lot I’d like to thank him for ….yet, I believe he knows 🙂 Much Love & Ladybugs (most humble thank you for your reply)
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