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Care

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by eyes + words
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Written by Jacob Ibrag

‘Where is all of this

going?’ She looked at him

as he began to get dressed.

Defeated with his lethargic

reaction, she took his hand

and guided it to her chest.

‘It’s breaking in front of

you, do you even care?’

Photographer Unknown

52 comments on “Care”

  1. JGomez's avatar
    JGomez
    October 17, 2016

    Beautiful poem.

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  3. Social Experiment Participant's avatar
    Social Experiment Participant
    October 17, 2016

    This piece is very strong in just a few words. I’m a big fan of this one.

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  4. Prisha and Grishi's avatar
    Rihanna
    October 17, 2016

    Wow! OMG I love this👍💯💯💯💯💯💯💯

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    Vivek Vatsal1
    October 17, 2016

    Crisp yet Awesome!!☺👍

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    TheOriginalPhoenix
    October 17, 2016

    I gasped when I read the last line, this is amazing.

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    fallingintotherain
    October 17, 2016

    I love it srsly i really do

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    Just Me
    October 17, 2016

    few words….powerful message. love it! happy monday, you!

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    Samantha
    October 17, 2016

    Simply beautiful and powerful.

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    bucketsandelephants
    October 17, 2016

    love!

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  12. Anamikaa's avatar
    unsaid words
    October 17, 2016

    It breaks my heart ,so relatable

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  13. Spiritual Journey Healing's avatar
    SpiritualJourney17
    October 17, 2016

    I was able to feel the words…powerful.

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  14. sinisterdarksoul's avatar
    sinisterdarksoul
    October 17, 2016

    Oh wow. That hurts in the feels. I could feel her heart breaking. 😦

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  15. Zortura's avatar
    Zortura
    October 17, 2016

    This is so deep

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    outspokenkitty
    October 18, 2016

    Complete simplicity and complexity of the moment. I love it.

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  19. Martin Swinford's avatar
    Martin
    October 18, 2016

    I love the way this uses so few words to capture a brief but critical moment

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  20. Debbie Gravett's avatar
    debbiegravett
    October 18, 2016

    Wow. Goosebumps. Such a beautiful tear-jerker. Well done.

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    joejackson
    October 18, 2016

    Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.

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    reupac
    October 18, 2016

    This reminds me of “This Love” by Maroon 5. I love the concept of this piece.

    – Reupac

    reupac.wordpress.com

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  23. SoulOfWit's avatar
    SoulOfWit
    October 18, 2016

    Brief…hard hitting. 💔

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  25. Timothy Shunnom Friday's avatar
    shunnom
    October 22, 2016

    Awesome… I could sense the emotion..

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  26. Thespian Drummer's avatar
    Thespian Drummer
    November 3, 2016

    Really enjoying your writing. Truly engaging! And thanks for acknowledging my blog. I am new to WordPress and learning more and more each day. Cheers! >Kevin<

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