Written by Jacob Ibrag
I get that this is a one time thing, yet
how can that be when you’re catching all of
these feelings? Sending messages with those
fingers, delivering Morse code through my
nerve endings. Seconds till this night is
another reflection. You want more.
I need a commitment.


It’s not how she feels about me but how I feel about me.
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I am a fan of your words.. ♡♥♡
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😀
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🙂 very true
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lyrically profound!
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Thank you 🙂
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thank YOU … ✌
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Wow wow wow! ♡♡♡
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Thanks 🙂
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This is a deep one!
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Great piece! You are a machine! (I mean this, of course, in a non-dehumanizing way!) You produce so much good content! Keep up the great work!
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Thanks Darryl 🙂
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Nobody owns anybody, let’s live together!
Celebrates, running dangerously, grandchildren
pissed an gaining control, because i’ve not live me..
start, heavy changes, lookout humanity, we have a king!
Let’s get together, an have a laugh…
i would like to thank you personally
for the support,
chris
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I really like your poetry. You do a great job of taking me to a place and giving distinct emotions and imagery in a few words only.
That’s talent in my opinion. ^_^
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Thank you very much 😀
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This is so beautiful. Totally hits home right now!
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Thank you 😀
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Simple, yet illustrative. Well done.
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Thanks Clark 🙂
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Beautiful… because its beautifully written or because its beauty strikes a note within my heart…..most likely its both.
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Thanks Cheryl 😀
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Its beautiful- there is more to feelings then commitment. I have come to understand that we pack all and store them dearly- if its a feeling we hold life time or a second.
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