Poetry

Cracks

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Written by Jacob Ibrag

The harder I tried to be within

your wavelength, the faster I found

myself slipping within the cracks of

your fingers. Hold on sweet sanity,

inject me with patience. I need

to make this make sense.

Photographer Unknown

32 comments on “Cracks”

  1. Rebecca DiFabbio's avatar
    beccaswordbeat
    November 4, 2016

    Beautiful!

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  3. nolongerhere's avatar
    emotionalspaces
    November 4, 2016

    Beautifully done!

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    Martian
    November 4, 2016

    Beautiful

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  5. Abe's avatar
    Ibrahim Abdullah
    November 4, 2016

    Beautiful indeed. Relatable too 😀

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  6. apoorvachouhan's avatar
    apoorvachouhan
    November 4, 2016

    This is completely making sense..😀
    Patience is a hard quality to achieve..😀

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    lifegoeson292
    November 4, 2016

    Says a lot in just a few words. Nice.

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  8. crislud's avatar
    crislud
    November 4, 2016

    I live it, every word tells my story, my agony

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    Devina
    November 4, 2016

    Damn … that’s clever.

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    El Coleccionista Hipnótico
    November 4, 2016

    Thoughtful and lucid. Beautifully written

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    Business and Beyond
    November 5, 2016

    Straight to the point! Love it!

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    Meiji Zapico
    November 5, 2016

    I love it!!!

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    Kolawole John
    November 5, 2016

    Reblogged this on mywordCanvass and commented:
    This is beautiful #Penguin

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  16. sinisterdarksoul's avatar
    sinisterdarksoul
    November 5, 2016

    Well done poetry (but that’s no surprise as you wrote it). Relationships are tricky. More so if you started young on that. People change a lot over time. It’s natural and sometimes can lead to people growing apart.

    Sad, and painful as that can be, it happens.

    Also, I’m referencing relationships as a whole. It doesn’t even have to be romantic in nature. I’ve grown apart from close friends before.

    I love your poem. ^_^

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    Grandtrines
    November 9, 2016

    Reblogged this on Orthometry.

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