Written by Jacob Ibrag
She watched as the man in red walked into
the room, as he gravitated towards everyone’s
direction except her own. Afraid to let anyone in,
one thought had her mind contemplating, ‘maybe
we need to break a little inside to make space for
those that are willing to crawl into our lives.’
Eyes + Words 
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Perhaps it would be better to show a breaking heart than to show a broken face. This sounds cruel to self , cruelty to self is not the way to let another in to our life, even if he is willing to crawl.
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Maybe you’re right. Something so cryptic about this image has me mesmerized.
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Interesting picture. It seems like something she sees is breaking the walls that she built in her mind. Or maybe that’s just me. LOL
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I like you too 😀
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If you like anything on my page and want to post it on yours, let me know. 🙂 I saw that you post other peoples work!
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Your blog link doesn’t work. You can definitely email some of your pieces to eyespluswords@gmail.com
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Thank you for following!
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http://www.hollyannkurt.wordpress.com
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You can also check out my blog to post anyone you like; as you post other peoples work. Or should I email you as well?
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Email is perfect 😀
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Then I’ll send a lot of poems so you can choose😀
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I’ve sent it. Tell me when you get it. Thank you!
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Like the pic, got my attention, and your post is intriguing.
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Wow, that’s a great thought that has occured to her. If we wouldn’t be able to feel pain, would we ever be able to understand each other? Would we ever feel a desire to communicate?
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Disturbing image, interesting thought.
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Thanks 🙂
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Reblogged this on PRINCE THEMBA.
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Splendid!
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Thank you 😀
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again i’d like to know the writer’s view. was she afraid to let anyone in – or is this the thought i’m getting – eventually we have this behaviour towards people and now that he din’t approach towards her – she corrects herself that we should let them crawl in sometimes.
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It could very well be that, this piece can be interpreted in several different ways.
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certainly. that’s why asked for the same. though we all live with our own interpretations but for once, I’d love to know the poet’s view.
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I’d have to agree with your interpretation in this instance. It’s definitely not limited to it though 🙂
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,, looking past the face & see the real person – love the pic & the post
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Thank you very much 🙂
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This is beautiful ❤
‘maybe
we need to break a little inside to make space for
those that are willing to crawl into our lives.’
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Thanks Jessy 🙂
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Np love 🙂
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Great poem, intense picture! Like it.
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Thank you 🙂
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yup, but, wouldn’t you much prefer that love can walk towards you, instead of crawling on all fours???
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Deep and beautiful. Suzanwrites.Wordpress.com
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Thanks Suzan 🙂
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beautiful
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Thanks 🙂
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Fantastic.
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Thank you 😀
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Woah!! Damn!! This is heartthrobing.💙
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Thank you very much 😀
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My pleasure! 💙
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