Poetry

Miss

Written by Jacob Ibrag

I understand the early sun better

than I do your smile. Ms. Double Entendre,

you’re making me second guess what we’ve become.

Miss sharing the night in the embrace of eachothers arms.

Ms. Don’t Worry, I depise drinking this morning joe. We’re

supposed to be sleeping in, not contemplating on yet

another weekend hour. Miss knowing who

we were before we got lost.


Photographer Unknown

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28 comments on “Miss

  1. z3ng33kgr7 | zGGy

    This is good…

    Liked by 2 people

  2. Absolutely phenomenal💥👍🤓

    Liked by 3 people

  3. enigmatic and beautiful………..loved this!!! 🙂 🙂

    Liked by 2 people

  4. We will always be trying to solve this puzzle and second guessing.

    Liked by 4 people

  5. Another wonderful piece of written mastery,

    ifinn only my vocabulary was a grand as yours, dear sir!

    chris

    Liked by 1 person

  6. I nominated you for a Mystery Blogger Award. Feel free to accept or decline – love your work just the same ! Here’s link to my nomination: https://haikubebe.com/2016/11/20/mystery-blogger-award-2016/

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Jacob, I have some emotions in me I want to express, I just don’t have the skill to do that eloquently enough to put it out there. They would be stilted and clumsy. You have the skill, probably honed over thousands of words, to say things in a way that moves your readers, makes them see what you see, feel what you feel. Thank you for putting in the time and effort to consistently create such art.

    I am in awe.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. What an delicious combination of word and image!

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Miss knowing who we were before we got lost…
    – This line is just amazing!

    Liked by 1 person

  10. I would just like to echo Stephen’s comment. A more beautifully bittersweet last line would be hard to find.

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Yashpal Kothari

    Awesome

    Like

  12. I love the subtext of this poem. Thanks for sharing! Have a good day, Sam 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

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