Written by Jacob Ibrag
I understand the early sun better
than I do your smile. Ms. Double Entendre,
you’re making me second guess what we’ve become.
Miss sharing the night in the embrace of eachothers arms.
Ms. Don’t Worry, I depise drinking this morning joe. We’re
supposed to be sleeping in, not contemplating on yet
another weekend hour. Miss knowing who
we were before we got lost.
Eyes + Words 
This is good…
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Thank you 😀
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❤️
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Absolutely phenomenal💥👍🤓
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Thank you very much 🙂
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enigmatic and beautiful………..loved this!!! 🙂 🙂
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Thank you 😀
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My pleasure…… 😀 😀
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We will always be trying to solve this puzzle and second guessing.
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Another wonderful piece of written mastery,
ifinn only my vocabulary was a grand as yours, dear sir!
chris
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Thank you Chris 😀
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I nominated you for a Mystery Blogger Award. Feel free to accept or decline – love your work just the same ! Here’s link to my nomination: https://haikubebe.com/2016/11/20/mystery-blogger-award-2016/
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Thank you 🙂
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Jacob, I have some emotions in me I want to express, I just don’t have the skill to do that eloquently enough to put it out there. They would be stilted and clumsy. You have the skill, probably honed over thousands of words, to say things in a way that moves your readers, makes them see what you see, feel what you feel. Thank you for putting in the time and effort to consistently create such art.
I am in awe.
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Your words means a lot to me, thanks Kevin 🙂
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Good, I’m glad. The skill to write well is hard-won and much easier than the skill to read. I appreciate you have taken the time.
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What an delicious combination of word and image!
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Thanks Deb 😀
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Miss knowing who we were before we got lost…
– This line is just amazing!
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Thanks Stephen 🙂
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well written 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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I would just like to echo Stephen’s comment. A more beautifully bittersweet last line would be hard to find.
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Thank you 🙂
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Awesome
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Thanks Yashpal 🙂
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I love the subtext of this poem. Thanks for sharing! Have a good day, Sam 🙂
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Thanks Sam 🙂
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