Written by Jacob Ibrag
We watched others
keep their flames awake
while losing track of our own
light as it slowly faded away. ‘This
was supposed to be easy,’ you sighed
as I pretended to be asleep. They
used to call us perfect, till
we let us depreciate.
Such a true profound statement!
As we slowly walk throughout life..
chris
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Thanks Chris π
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Mosted kindedly welcome!
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oh, I can relate!
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You have a way with words, I know that, everybody knows that. I’m cheering towards reading something more from you. Something that blows us away!
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Thanks Ali π
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Beautiful – played my heartstrings β€οΈπβ¨
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Thank you π
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Nicely done. You’ve captured the sense of loss that creeps up undetected.
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Thanks Martin π
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Beautiful
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Thank you π
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My pleasure
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