Poetry

Asleep

Written by Jacob Ibrag

We watched others

keep their flames awake

while losing track of our own

light as it slowly faded away. ‘This

was supposed to be easy,’ you sighed

as I pretended to be asleep. They

used to call us perfect, till

we let us depreciate.


Photographer Unknown

14 comments on “Asleep

  1. chris jensen's avatar

    Such a true profound statement!

    As we slowly walk throughout life..

    chris

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  2. Nadine's avatar

    oh, I can relate!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Ali Qureshi's avatar

    You have a way with words, I know that, everybody knows that. I’m cheering towards reading something more from you. Something that blows us away!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Kate@athousandbitsofpaper's avatar

    Beautiful – played my heartstrings β€οΈπŸ‘Œβœ¨

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  5. Martin Swinford's avatar

    Nicely done. You’ve captured the sense of loss that creeps up undetected.

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  6. emotionsoflife2016's avatar
    emotionsoflife2016

    Beautiful

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  7. devereaux frazier's avatar
    devereaux frazier

    Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.

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