Poetry

Focus

Written by Jacob Ibrag

Stopping for a moment, she tilted her head back and

embraced being lost in the center of the forest. While most

would’ve striven to find a way out, she wanted nothing more

than to remain out of focus. Becoming part of the fabric of

uncertainty outweighed her learned habit to conform.


Photographer Unknown

33 comments on “Focus

  1. faithlesspaladin's avatar

    Wow! This really great! Short and evocative! We don’t lose ourselves in the world nearly enough.

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  2. darsapoetry's avatar

    Short and sweet πŸ˜‰

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  3. chris jensen's avatar

    Disappearing in a crowd!

    chris

    Liked by 3 people

  4. Anita Bacha's avatar

    Intriguing as usual..wetting the appetite of the reader to know more…of the lost soul

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  6. emotionsoflife2016's avatar
    emotionsoflife2016

    Nicely express

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  7. Nick Thompson's avatar

    Nice, I really like this.

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  8. Ali Grimshaw's avatar

    Choosing uncertainty is a rarity. Thank you for sharing the value of exploring other ways of being.

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    EndlessRivers

    Love this!

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  11. hendkh's avatar

    Out of focus …love it

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  12. AlaraCharis's avatar
    alaraoluwaseyi

    This is awesome

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  13. taurusingemini's avatar

    Looks like your narrator had, found a comfortable place to be herself, without ANY need to conform to anybody else’s beliefs of how she should be,s he stay true to her own self, and that takes a ton of courage…

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  14. girlintheblackchaddar's avatar

    heartfelt

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  15. Linda J. Wolff | Founder of Wolff Poetry Literary Magazine's avatar

    great meaning behind those words.

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  16. maxjemin's avatar

    This is beautiful.

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