Poetry Done by eyes + wordsFebruary 23, 2017 Comments 33 Written by Jacob Ibrag I feel like we’re playing tennis with each others feelings, and every time I think we’re done with these games, you ace me. Photography by Brooke Didonato Share ThisClick to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)Click to share on Tumblr (Opens in new window)Click to share on Reddit (Opens in new window)Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window)Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window)Click to share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window)Click to print (Opens in new window)Like this:Like Loading... 33 comments on “Done” thoughtinvestment.wordpress.com February 23, 2017 That’s the thing with games, there’s always got to be a winner… LikeLiked by 7 people Reply braveandrecklessblog February 23, 2017 Ouch! LikeLiked by 3 people Reply chris jensen February 23, 2017 Beautifully metaphorically written! chris LikeLiked by 4 people Reply eyes + words February 23, 2017 Thanks Chris 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply shrinksarentcheap February 23, 2017 I’m good like that 😉 LikeLiked by 2 people Reply eyes + words February 23, 2017 😀 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Ali Qureshi February 23, 2017 Nice, short and subtle! Fine work! 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply eyes + words February 23, 2017 Thanks Ali 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply mahbuttitches February 23, 2017 It’s all fun and games, until you poke your eye out. Then it’s fun and games you can’t see! ~James Hetfield It’s fun to have fun, but you gotta know how ~Dr. Seuss LikeLiked by 1 person Reply pattonpal February 23, 2017 Wow, fantastic! Straight to the core of my feelings LikeLiked by 1 person Reply eyes + words February 23, 2017 Thank you 😀 LikeLike Reply emotionsoflife2016 February 23, 2017 Wow LikeLike Reply Krystle February 23, 2017 Amazing!!! LikeLiked by 2 people Reply eyes + words February 23, 2017 Thanks Krystle 😀 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Krystle February 23, 2017 I used to play tennis and I was amazed how you turn it around like that and I didn’t even see it coming when I know the terminology! beautiful piece! LikeLiked by 2 people eyes + words February 23, 2017 I’m really happy you enjoyed it 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Krystle February 23, 2017 look forward to reading more! LikeLiked by 1 person Prajakta February 23, 2017 Short and crisp 😊 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply eyes + words February 23, 2017 Thanks Prajakta 🙂 LikeLike Reply Robin February 23, 2017 Beautiful! Lovely metaphors. I play tennis and I think this comparison fits wonderfully here. Lovely poem! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply eyes + words February 23, 2017 Thanks Robin 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply yuhublogger February 23, 2017 Tennis huh? A brilliant comparison. Loved it. I’m sure many of us can relate to this. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply eyes + words February 23, 2017 Thank you 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply moyoisamazing February 23, 2017 This is brilliant 👏👏👏👏💙 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply eyes + words February 23, 2017 Thank you very much 😀 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply MyLifeandPets February 24, 2017 Perfect LikeLiked by 2 people Reply eyes + words February 24, 2017 Thanks 🙂 LikeLike Reply Zola Bee February 27, 2017 I love all your poems Jacob! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply eyes + words February 27, 2017 I’m very happy that you do 🙂 LikeLike Reply Jo Brown April 5, 2017 Oof, that packs a punch. Great writing, well done. LikeLike Reply eyes + words April 5, 2017 Thanks Jo 🙂 LikeLike Reply georgethomaspoetry April 5, 2017 Amazing 🙂 very profound. Well done. 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply eyes + words April 5, 2017 Thanks George 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply What Do You Think? Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. Δ Post navigation Previous Post Next Post
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That’s the thing with games, there’s always got to be a winner…
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Ouch!
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Beautifully metaphorically written!
chris
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Thanks Chris 🙂
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I’m good like that 😉
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Nice, short and subtle!
Fine work! 🙂
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Thanks Ali 🙂
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It’s all fun and games, until you poke your eye out. Then it’s fun and games you can’t see! ~James Hetfield
It’s fun to have fun, but you gotta know how ~Dr. Seuss
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Wow, fantastic! Straight to the core of my feelings
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Thank you 😀
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Wow
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Amazing!!!
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Thanks Krystle 😀
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I used to play tennis and I was amazed how you turn it around like that and I didn’t even see it coming when I know the terminology! beautiful piece!
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I’m really happy you enjoyed it 🙂
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look forward to reading more!
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Short and crisp 😊
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Thanks Prajakta 🙂
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Beautiful! Lovely metaphors. I play tennis and I think this comparison fits wonderfully here. Lovely poem!
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Thanks Robin 🙂
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Tennis huh? A brilliant comparison. Loved it. I’m sure many of us can relate to this.
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Thank you 🙂
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This is brilliant 👏👏👏👏💙
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Thank you very much 😀
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Perfect
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Thanks 🙂
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I love all your poems Jacob!
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I’m very happy that you do 🙂
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Oof, that packs a punch. Great writing, well done.
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Thanks Jo 🙂
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Amazing 🙂 very profound. Well done. 🙂
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Thanks George 🙂
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