Poetry

Done

Written by Jacob Ibrag

I feel like we’re playing tennis with

each others feelings, and every time I think

we’re done with these games, you ace me.


Photography by Brooke Didonato

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33 comments on “Done

  1. That’s the thing with games, there’s always got to be a winner…

    Liked by 7 people

  2. Beautifully metaphorically written!

    chris

    Liked by 4 people

  3. I’m good like that πŸ˜‰

    Liked by 2 people

  4. Nice, short and subtle!
    Fine work! πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  5. It’s all fun and games, until you poke your eye out. Then it’s fun and games you can’t see! ~James Hetfield

    It’s fun to have fun, but you gotta know how ~Dr. Seuss

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Wow, fantastic! Straight to the core of my feelings

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Amazing!!!

    Liked by 2 people

  8. Short and crisp 😊

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Beautiful! Lovely metaphors. I play tennis and I think this comparison fits wonderfully here. Lovely poem!

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Tennis huh? A brilliant comparison. Loved it. I’m sure many of us can relate to this.

    Liked by 2 people

  11. moyoisamazing

    This is brilliant πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’™

    Liked by 1 person

  12. I love all your poems Jacob!

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Oof, that packs a punch. Great writing, well done.

    Like

  14. georgethomaspoetry

    Amazing πŸ™‚ very profound. Well done. πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

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