Poetry

Done

Written by Jacob Ibrag

I feel like we’re playing tennis with

each others feelings, and every time I think

we’re done with these games, you ace me.


Photography by Brooke Didonato

33 comments on “Done

  1. thoughtinvestment.wordpress.com's avatar

    That’s the thing with games, there’s always got to be a winner…

    Liked by 7 people

  2. chris jensen's avatar

    Beautifully metaphorically written!

    chris

    Liked by 4 people

  3. Georgia's avatar

    I’m good like that 😉

    Liked by 2 people

  4. Ali Qureshi's avatar

    Nice, short and subtle!
    Fine work! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  5. mahbuttitches's avatar

    It’s all fun and games, until you poke your eye out. Then it’s fun and games you can’t see! ~James Hetfield

    It’s fun to have fun, but you gotta know how ~Dr. Seuss

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  6. pattonpal's avatar

    Wow, fantastic! Straight to the core of my feelings

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  7. emotionsoflife2016's avatar
    emotionsoflife2016

    Wow

    Like

  8. Generation Confused's avatar

    Amazing!!!

    Liked by 2 people

  9. Prajakta's avatar

    Short and crisp 😊

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Nonexistent's avatar

    Beautiful! Lovely metaphors. I play tennis and I think this comparison fits wonderfully here. Lovely poem!

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  11. Yuhu's avatar

    Tennis huh? A brilliant comparison. Loved it. I’m sure many of us can relate to this.

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  12. moyoisamazing's avatar
    moyoisamazing

    This is brilliant 👏👏👏👏💙

    Liked by 1 person

  13. mystoryandpets's avatar
    MyLifeandPets

    Perfect

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  14. Zola Bee's avatar

    I love all your poems Jacob!

    Liked by 1 person

  15. Jo Brown's avatar

    Oof, that packs a punch. Great writing, well done.

    Like

  16. georgethomaspoetry's avatar
    georgethomaspoetry

    Amazing 🙂 very profound. Well done. 🙂

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