Written by Jacob Ibrag
I feel like we’re playing tennis with
each others feelings, and every time I think
we’re done with these games, you ace me.
Photography by Brooke Didonato
Written by Jacob Ibrag
I feel like we’re playing tennis with
each others feelings, and every time I think
we’re done with these games, you ace me.
Photography by Brooke Didonato
That’s the thing with games, there’s always got to be a winner…
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Ouch!
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Beautifully metaphorically written!
chris
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Thanks Chris π
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I’m good like that π
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Nice, short and subtle!
Fine work! π
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Thanks Ali π
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It’s all fun and games, until you poke your eye out. Then it’s fun and games you can’t see! ~James Hetfield
It’s fun to have fun, but you gotta know how ~Dr. Seuss
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Wow, fantastic! Straight to the core of my feelings
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Thank you π
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Wow
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Amazing!!!
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Thanks Krystle π
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I used to play tennis and I was amazed how you turn it around like that and I didn’t even see it coming when I know the terminology! beautiful piece!
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I’m really happy you enjoyed it π
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look forward to reading more!
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Short and crisp π
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Thanks Prajakta π
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Beautiful! Lovely metaphors. I play tennis and I think this comparison fits wonderfully here. Lovely poem!
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Thanks Robin π
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Tennis huh? A brilliant comparison. Loved it. I’m sure many of us can relate to this.
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Thank you π
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This is brilliant πππππ
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Thank you very much π
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Perfect
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Thanks π
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I love all your poems Jacob!
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I’m very happy that you do π
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Oof, that packs a punch. Great writing, well done.
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Thanks Jo π
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Amazing π very profound. Well done. π
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Thanks George π
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