Written by Jacob Ibrag
‘I don’t know what to say to make
this any better,’ he explains as she begins
to walk in the opposite direction. ‘Don’t say
anything, just walk beside me. This won’t
define us, at least not completely.’
Written by Jacob Ibrag
‘I don’t know what to say to make
this any better,’ he explains as she begins
to walk in the opposite direction. ‘Don’t say
anything, just walk beside me. This won’t
define us, at least not completely.’


Lovely!
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Thanks Roy 🙂
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Sounds like your character’s have things they must figure out, then, cope with whatever it is they decide to do…
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Again, I love your ability to shed light on very real life experiences in so few words. It makes your work able to be interpreted in so many different ways.
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Thank you very much Trevor 😀
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I must agree with Trevor… You have a talent to say so much with so little. Like this one here; I relate so much to this scene. It’s a whole scene painted, as if I had this experience once before.
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Thank you 😀
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I loved it! Amazing image in just a few words! Awesome!
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Thank you 🙂
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Nominated you for the Versatile & Sunshine Blogger Award: https://gemsofliteratureblog.wordpress.com/2017/04/11/novel-updates-blogger-awards-poem/
🙂
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Thanks Robin 😀
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Great poem!
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Thanks 🙂
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Just went through such a scene last night! Thanks for putting it into words. 🙂
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