Poetry

One Another

Written by Jacob Ibrag

‘What did I do?’ It’s not what

you did, it’s what’s coming. I knew as

soon as we touched, I saw the middle and

end of us. It’s not what you did, it’s what’ll

happen if we remain with one another.


Photographer Unknown

12 comments on “One Another

  1. Whiskey&Lemon's avatar

    Touched my heart. This is a very beautiful piece.

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  2. Demetri's avatar

    I know this feeling.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. nyonglema's avatar

    Concise and sweet. In a few words there’s joy, hope, fear. This is a feeling we all know, all live.

    Liked by 2 people

  4. nsheron's avatar

    This is deep…<3

    Liked by 1 person

  5. bluejeansongster's avatar

    I like the way this evokes strong feeling…but it’s sad. 😦

    Liked by 1 person

  6. taurusingemini's avatar

    So, because you can foresee the end, you’d, not even begun…

    Liked by 1 person

  7. happylikekungfupanda's avatar

    I just went through this. I knew we would say goodbye as soon as we met. Nonetheless, I treasured the little time that we had. It was worth knowing him.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Nancilynn's avatar

    I’ve lived through this always blind while doing so.

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