Written by Jacob Ibrag
I didn’t ask for this, couldn’t help it. You
walked in through that door and I didn’t belong
to me anymore. Didn’t even see you at first, didn’t
matter. The way the air tasted, filling my lungs and
leaving, was this breathing? Numbness delivered to
my knees, paralyzing my limbs, never felt so weak. In
that moment, I felt pain. Couldn’t explain it, like I knew
something was missing. Wasn’t missing yesterday, yet
it was obvious now. An emptiness. Up until now, I
existed without a rhyme or reason. You probably
think I’m crazy, but you’re smiling. Please, say
anything. What is this I’m feeling?


Great write, painful!
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Thank you 🙂
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Wonderful. It makes you want to keep reading more and more.
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Thanks Tanya 🙂
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Love this!
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Thank you 🙂
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This is really great. Nice writing. 🙂
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Thanks Elliane 🙂
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‘I didn’t belong to me anymore’ , the line is beautiful 🙂
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Thanks Kinshuk 🙂
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heartfelt 🙂
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😀
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A Beauty :’)
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Thanks 🙂
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Poignant.
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nice
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Thanks 🙂
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